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4th theme : Dark.

Again, so busy XP but I made it :dance: Oh, I use black marker pen...

Akai/Art (c) :iconkazenori-kazuya:
Star brush (c) :iconredheadstock:
Butterfly brush (c) :iconchrissym:

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:icontratsini:
She looks so elegant :heart:

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:iconkazenori-kazuya:
Thanks so much X3 :iconnewhugplz:

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:iconfalchion36:
interesting design. pose and structure is sound. colors are proper as is the balance with the additional brush effects.

one thing that weakens the form is (I'm sure you knew this) the feet. I know they're tricky to draw but its necessary that its detail is that of the hands. otherwise it will seem a little more out of place.

at the heel, the upper part of the feet, and the toes seem a bit awkward as well. by trimming from the front of the shin you can (or could) make her feet a little more dainty.

another key structure flaw is her shins. from the groin to the kneecap, the shin is EXACTLY the same length from kneecap to heel. i'm sure you know this (by quickly scanning your gallery) but by targeting these flaws you're capable of dropping these bad habits and have beautiful consistent forms every time.

Despite these minor flaws (and despite me making a big freakin' deal about them) you have made a beautiful composure. don't let these get you down but learn and improve upon what you've previously created. you'll be surprised on what you can accomplish!

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:iconkazenori-kazuya:
Yeah, I have problems with feet. I'm still practising on that part but thanks for looking at my weak spot and the advice T____T

I really appreciate the critique. I'll try to make it better next time :)

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:iconfalchion36:
really hard to draw them. hell i have problems with them as well.

might not hurt to find references like in beauty magazines or celebrity feet through almighty Google and revisit structure and various other perspectives to practice quick studies with.

trust me on this. Nothing is more helpful than references.

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"Enjoy every moment with all ya got. The World Ends With You. If you want to enjoy life, expand your world. You gotta push your horizons out as far as they'll go."

-Sanae Hanekoma
:iconkazenori-kazuya:
I know, I've been trying to find some -___-"

So, you good at sketches?

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:iconkazenori-kazuya:
Thanks so much again and the fav too

:iconfurrydanceplz::iconfurrydanceplz::iconfurrydanceplz:

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:iconnaomiangelz:
so lovely*w*~ her dress ush so elegant. nice Bg 2^^~

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